My dog is called cleo here is some facts
She is 10 years old
She is a golden colour
She will kill for rice
She is adorable
She hates salt water
she is imune to covid 19
I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
My dog is called cleo here is some facts
She is 10 years old
She is a golden colour
She will kill for rice
She is adorable
She hates salt water
she is imune to covid 19
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i like your dog how long have you had it
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ReplyDeleteI like how you put the info in a list and not just mushed together.
All dogs are immune to covid.
Maybe centre the words and pic. And why is a 1. Next to your pic?
From Marama
ReplyDeleteHi Alife
your dog is so cute and it is immune to covid 19 haha so funny
But maybe you can add some more like what her eye color or if it is a boy or girl
Hi Alfie I really think that you should put facts on it its really cool bye from Ele
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