I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hello alfie Your 24 hour map looks really cool how did you do it ? the pictures are very well spread out good job alfie from Lennox (some one in your buddy class)
Hi Alfie. love your 24 hr map footprint and the way you shaped the Island into a dragon type shape. Instead of using half of it I would spread it out a bit more so you can see it more clearly. It is great and amazing though.bye
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Hello alfie
ReplyDeleteYour 24 hour map looks really cool
how did you do it ?
the pictures are very well spread out
good job alfie
from Lennox
(some one in your buddy class)
Hi Alfie. love your 24 hr map footprint and the way you shaped the Island into a dragon type shape.
ReplyDeleteInstead of using half of it I would spread it out a bit more so you can see it more clearly.
It is great and amazing though.bye